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Without You

January 17, 2014
By daddysgirl1954 BRONZE, Conway, South Carolina
daddysgirl1954 BRONZE, Conway, South Carolina
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Like a dagger through the heart
Suddenly swept from light unto dark
Happiness abundant no more
My everything has left
My heart now deserted for evermore
A smile is never again on my face
Only painful memories remain
Striking me down with a bitter sweet knife to my soul
A chapter of my life is ending as you leave me
A new one not to begin without you
The world keeps spinning
Ironically mine has crashed


The author's comments:
I wrote this about how I felt when my daddy died. I lost my everything, words cant describe how much I miss him. I hope other people that have lost someone that really love can read this and relate to my feeling and knowing they are not alone.

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on Jan. 29 2014 at 8:54 pm
daddysgirl1954 BRONZE, Conway, South Carolina
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thank you 

Sylviaa BRONZE said...
on Jan. 21 2014 at 1:07 pm
Sylviaa BRONZE, Lexington, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't forget that I cannot see myself, that my role is limited to being the one who looks in the mirror." -Jacque Rigaut

This is beautiful.  I am so sorry for your loss.