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The Nightly Escape

December 8, 2013
By waterbaby BRONZE, Irvine, California
waterbaby BRONZE, Irvine, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Salt water cures everything: sweat, tears, and the sea."


Maybe I just liked
to feel the night air
and let it wash over me
like silky water.
Maybe I craved the rush of the pines
in that breeze and
the ancient tales they spun for me
under the cover of the ebony night.
Maybe I longed to hear the lady in the brook, her perpetual burbling laughter lulling me to sleep.
I think it was the meadow-grass, peppered with daisies, that called me to the wild field when the sun hid behind the hills; its breathy murmur roared like thunder in my ears.
Sometimes I think I just wanted to see the stars like pieces of the opal moon and know that something so complex and intricate could be so simple and true.



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Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Dec. 11 2013 at 4:47 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

I can't believe no one has commented on this yet. You're a briliant writer, and it shows through this piece. Wonderful imagery and metaphors-- The ending was definitely my favorite. Keep it up, and you'll go far! :)