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Hands

November 14, 2013
By 56839-for-you SILVER, Hendersonville, North Carolina
56839-for-you SILVER, Hendersonville, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"how happy is the blameless vessels lot. The world forgiving by the world forgot. Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind. Each prayer accepted. Each wish resigned."


small hands
he has small hands
with fragile fingers
like sticks
easy to snap
for such a small hand
he really can
hold my heart


The author's comments:
i wrote this one about a boy i like

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on Nov. 20 2013 at 9:07 am
56839-for-you SILVER, Hendersonville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"how happy is the blameless vessels lot. The world forgiving by the world forgot. Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind. Each prayer accepted. Each wish resigned."

thANK YOU REALLY MUCH FOR READING MY POEM AND IF IT WOULD BE OK IT WOULD BE NICE IF YOU COULD HAVE MORE PEOPLE READ IT :)

on Nov. 18 2013 at 9:41 pm
EmmaClaire0823 GOLD, Bay Minette, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

Okay, I really love this poem. It is short and to the point with a lot of meaning. You really expressed what you were thinking in a relatable way that isn't overdramatic. The only thing I would consider changing is taking out like (in front of sticks) and small hands (the first line).