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A Love Affair with Orange Juice MAG

October 20, 2013
By FinnWinterfall GOLD, Rochester, Massachusetts
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FinnWinterfall GOLD, Rochester, Massachusetts
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I take you home with me
From the market,
All the while restraining myself
From drinking you
Until morning time.
But I can't bear it…
I want you,
I NEED you,
You are the love of my life.
So I break under the pressure
And take out a glass,
I open the fridge
Take you in my hand,
And pooouur.
You are now in my cup,
I hope you don't mind.
I say a prayer to the fruit gods
And pay my respects.
Then I take a sip.
And another,
And another,
I can't stop.
I keep gulping away
To the very
Last
Drop…
Oh no!
I realize as I look at the empty jug.
My one and only love is…
GONE!
I scream
I shout
I cry
I am ready to die.
Oh, what wouldn't I do,
To get myself some more of you.

© Bianca A., Damascus, MD

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Obviously I have an obsession with Orange Juice.
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elsie01px2019 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 11 2015 at 10:29 am
elsie01px2019 BRONZE, Shanghai, Other
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Way to make something simple hilarious! Write on!
Chubby_Hearts PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 5:14 pm
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OMG! I think I am scarred for life now! This is Hillarious and I am going to go get me some orange juice! lol
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one word: LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tamy24 said...
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This was AWESOME. The imagery that you used made me want to read more and that's what a Writer does. Really nice.
abividrey SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2013 at 11:49 am
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this was AWESOME! reminds me of something my cousin Jeff would write! lol
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BEST POEM EVA! anything with onrange juice is awesome way to go i like then end were you scream nad cry best part
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM said...
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ROFL!!! I LOVE THIS ONE!!!