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Alone

October 16, 2013
By Fofo123 BRONZE, Reno, Nevada
Fofo123 BRONZE, Reno, Nevada
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You left me
It's not you fault.
I blame life,
the life you gave
before you left
If it wasn't for that,
you would be here
in this world living free
but where would I be?
It was me,
you left because of me
if it wasn't for me
you would be here
in this world
but I understand
this is the way it had to be
I will succeed and make your sacrifice worth it
I am the last bit of life
that remains of you
and for this
I will make you proud


The author's comments:
That even when you lose someone you love you have to keep trying in life no matter what.

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on Nov. 17 2013 at 10:29 pm
real_and_awake SILVER, Katy, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
above all else to thine ownself be true

this is great! very inspiring for whenevr u feel down, i can see the theme and purpose, keep up the good work :)

east_of_ada said...
on Oct. 24 2013 at 8:07 pm
east_of_ada, Null, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;As for me, I am a watercolor. I wash off.&quot; (via Anne Sexton,&quot;For My Lover, Returning To His Wife&quot;)<br /> <br /> &quot;I think I made you up inside my head.&#039;&#039; (via Sylvia Plath, &quot;Mad Girl&#039;s Love Song&quot;)<br /> <br /> &quot;You called it cosmic; I thought it was icy.&quot; (via Ada Coen)

very nice~ i liked the overall theme of the poem as well as the very last line of it~