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what rain is like

October 7, 2013
By alycia_yang BRONZE, New Brighton, MN, Minnesota
alycia_yang BRONZE, New Brighton, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
No matter what happens you will get through it sooner or later. Nothing is permanent.


Rain.
The skies turn gray as if a storm was coming in.
As if the gods from above are weeping with sadness.
When the rain is falling it sounds like the gods are stepping on stones,
making loud thunders going BOOM! BOOM! ROAR!
The air smells like the ocean
The rain taste like salt
The plash look like tiny little pools.
It downpour like a waterfall
It sounds like the wind howls as if it was calling your name
Rain roars , runs , seeking revenge.
As you conceal under your covers for safety you still have an urge to see what is
happening.
And as it stops to rain you can see how much damage the rain cost when you were
hiding for protection.



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on Oct. 8 2013 at 8:36 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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I like how you put general feelings into this poem! Nice job!

LindsayB GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2013 at 6:26 pm
LindsayB GOLD, Aston, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't need to be brave every minute of everyday, just a few seconds at a time."

This brought me back to when I was a kid and would hide out/sneakily watch the thunderstorms. Good job! Just try and watch your grammar/spelling.