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August 22, 2013
By migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present." --Marcus Aurelius

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brandnew sensations
sleep soundly at six am;
something's started.

© Chyi-Dean S., North Tustin, CA

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 28 2013 at 7:16 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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I love poems that trump me. And make me think as your other haiku "her body as a resting place" which shouldn't have trumped for so long as it did. But it did. Until I finally deciphered it, or so I think. I can visualize the beginning. But it's the ending that leaves me puzzled. It's vague but SOMETHING GOING ON! Or will happen. But what!? XD Regardless, it's captivating because of this. Talented talented writer. I'm not sure if I've said that before.