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A Dancer

July 17, 2013
By -namaste- BRONZE, Brampton, Other
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All dreams are dreamt to be true,<br /> Because the sun sets to shine in the morning.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - SeiraBlyton

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Gathering flow,
Gathering kindness,
Gathering love,
To fill my heart up.
To make it beat in rhythm.
To make it pump in happiness.
So even if it punchers,
It overflows rhythmically with love and kindness.

Let me be of what I want to,
Of what I desire.
If 'No',
Then give me an answer,
Because I just want to be a dancer.

Before its too late,
Let me know.

Let me put my dancing shoes on ,
Before the music is gone,
Cause my heart will run along.

All I am asking for is just an answer,
Because all I ever wanted to be is A Dancer!

© Sarah C., Hillsdale, NJ

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-namaste- BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 6:24 pm
-namaste- BRONZE, Brampton, Other
3 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
All dreams are dreamt to be true,<br /> Because the sun sets to shine in the morning.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - SeiraBlyton

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Thank u!!! N i will keep ur advice in mind!
Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 12:37 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

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My favourite line is "Before the music is gone, Cause my heart will run along." Great job and I huess i"ll echo the rythm advice. :)
-namaste- BRONZE said...
on Jul. 23 2013 at 8:38 pm
-namaste- BRONZE, Brampton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All dreams are dreamt to be true,<br /> Because the sun sets to shine in the morning.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - SeiraBlyton

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I really appriciate your suggestion n i will definatly work on it.... Thank you
sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 23 2013 at 11:43 am
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

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i really like this, but i would suggest either keeping the rhthym of the beginning of the poem, or the rhythm of the last thirteen lines. maybe consitancy us boring, but it would make it easier to follow. Great job though