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The Change.

July 10, 2013
By nicolerosier BRONZE, Tampa, Florida
nicolerosier BRONZE, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't expect things to happen. Its better to feel surprised then disappointed."


We lost something.
Im not sure what that something is.
But,
We lost that cute teasing,
Holding hands,
Seeing each other every other every weekend,
It all changed.
I dont know why.
We just changed.
I hardly see you.
We dont tease each other any more,
We stopped holding hands,
You started acting as if I wasnt something to you anymore.
It all got serious.
One day you showed me a bruise from work
I wish I could show you my bruise,
My heart is bruised,
from all the beating its taking...
from this change.
We used to be perfect..
Perfect for each other.
Why did we change?
I wonder that as I watch.
Watching you walk away...
From me.


The author's comments:
im not a poetry person im trying somethings out, if theres things I can work on. Help me out :)

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on Aug. 2 2013 at 10:57 pm
nicolerosier BRONZE, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't expect things to happen. Its better to feel surprised then disappointed."

Thank you :)

on Jul. 11 2013 at 12:42 am
Phantasmagoric BRONZE, Carlsbad, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angry, and half in love with you, and tremendously sorry, I turned away." F. Scott Fitzgerald

Watch the past to present changes when you write, you went from watch to watching which always makes things a tad choppy; if you want things to flow try to rhyme some words. You could try to rhyme the last word with one from a stanza one or two above, it really makes it flow more. But keep writing! You'll get the hang of it!