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love lessons

May 10, 2013
By paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
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be your own doctor
you little love hypochondriac
dare to diagnose yourself
with hopeless romanticism
and prescribe falling love
as your treatment method-
instead, choose the homeopathic route
and wait until love finds you
that's the only way it's real
or true anymore anyways
you go searching and come home
empty-handed every time



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Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 25 2013 at 1:09 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

very memorable. and mesmerizing as metal4life said. i love how the first 4 or so lines. when you say to diagnose yourself. love is such a complicated emotion. and your poem demonstrates it perfectly. i love that ending. 

on May. 20 2013 at 9:19 pm
Metalhead08 GOLD, Port Republic, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather hate you for everything you are. Than ever love you for something you are not. &quot; FFDP &quot;You&#039;re born alone and you die alone&quot; FFDP &quot;I wonder out where you can&#039;t see, inside my shell I wait and bleed.&quot; Slipknot &quot; If youre 555 then I am 666&quot;

Very unique idea! Great flow of words, and very mesmerizing theme! Job well done!