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Life...

May 2, 2013
By blondiemitchell BRONZE, Centralia, Washington
blondiemitchell BRONZE, Centralia, Washington
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I wanted the blood to be gone
the memory to disappear
I was hurting deeply
searching
falling tears crowded me
the murmurs drowned me
whispers stabbed my heart
this mark would be so immense that no power could do a thing
images flooded my mind
misery



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on Jun. 13 2013 at 9:58 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

Love it :) It's beautiful and sad. 

on May. 17 2013 at 9:03 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Here is a small fact: You are going to die.&quot; ~The Book Thief<br /> &quot;You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self.&quot; ~Mikey Pasterik

Very good!! I like how it flows so gracefully and somehow you seem to finish the thought with a short, choppy (not in a bad way) word that has so much meaning

however, I would suggest you add some grammar.    Other than that, I love it!! I'm giving it 5 stars :D