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11pm thoughts

March 15, 2013
By paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
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my mind is running
on empty thoughts
sorting, organizing,
trying to find
any remnants of you

like when someone
stays the night
and in the morning
you happen upon their
used gum wrapper

mindlesslly, you toss it-

if only you knew
how much i'd give
for one gum wrapper
of yours



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 8 2013 at 4:34 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

My jaw is hanging loose in awe of this poem. Last line: tear jerker.