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March 14, 2013
By norcalsouthpawz BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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" Technique and ability alone do not get you to the top; it is the willpower that is most important. This willpower you can not buy with money or be given by others... it rises from your heart."

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what is pain?
is pain what keeps you going
is pain whatkeeps you back
is pain what we live in
i think pain as a matter of fact
the thing that we need most
pain keeps us thinking
is it worth it or is it not
pain is on the clock
pain is not weakness leaving the body
pain is actually stored
in a container that can never be full
its also a container that will explode
in thousands of little pieces
what we call feelings
those feelings cause more pain
so its a circle that never ends
just like life
or whatever we call it...

© Nick C., Boca Raton, FL

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i wrote this poem thinking about how my feelings have lead me to pain.but i learned from my mistakes.
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