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Goodbye Poem

January 23, 2013
By DarkAngel101 GOLD, Birmingham, Alabama
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DarkAngel101 GOLD, Birmingham, Alabama
13 articles 2 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't count your tears, they mean only sorrow. But count the ones you hold back, which are your strength that makes you stronger."

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My life started off hard
With my birth and scars
Adults are more trusted and believed then kids themselves
I hate when people lie and get believed
I am tired of this life
So why is it not over?
I tried and tried, but they always saved me
Why? Why? Why?
My life is living on and on in this terrible world
I am tired of this life because it’s not over
I guess I will try again and hope I will not wake up from the darkness
God this. God that.
Devil this. Devil that.
No proof is shown but I still pray
No miracles are shown so I don’t believe.
So where will I go when I die?
Return to the darkness I shall
Dear World,
Goodbye!!!

© Fallon K., Baldwin, NY

The author's comments:
I was suicidal during my eight grade year. They found out that anti-depression pills can cause suicidal thoughts especially at high doses. This was when i was taking them. I felt as if I was bad and the final straw was when I almost died from an overdose of my sleeping pills.
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KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2013 at 11:28 am
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER, Charlott, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss

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It is my plesure
DarkAngel101 GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2013 at 10:20 am
DarkAngel101 GOLD, Birmingham, Alabama
13 articles 2 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t count your tears, they mean only sorrow. But count the ones you hold back, which are your strength that makes you stronger.&quot;

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Thank you.
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2013 at 8:21 am
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER, Charlott, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss

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I promes you I will lestien
DarkAngel101 GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 3:05 pm
DarkAngel101 GOLD, Birmingham, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t count your tears, they mean only sorrow. But count the ones you hold back, which are your strength that makes you stronger.&quot;

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I wish no one would feel that way but it is like I want to do drugs again, cut myself again, and try to kill myself again. This is almost everyday and it is like no one wants to listen.
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER said...
on Mar. 4 2013 at 9:02 am
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER, Charlott, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss

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I have felt that way before