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Me &You <3

January 31, 2013
By AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
16 articles 2 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you have to forget whats gone appreciate what still remains and look forward to whats coming next


I look up at the sky then look besides me
I see you sitting next to me with your arms around me
You take by the hand and take me to the beach
We look at the sunset and you tell me how beautiful I am
You kiss on the check and I feel so clam with you
You tell how I mean the world to you
Even though we are apart I know you're in my heart
Even if it's cold or its snowing it ain't nothing as long as your with me


The author's comments:
I wrote the poem for someone special <3

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on Apr. 16 2014 at 12:26 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

This is good..but I feel the flow is a bit stilted...

Harri SILVER said...
on Apr. 16 2014 at 12:10 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
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Well done! I would remove the word "AinT" though an replace it with somehing else. I feel it ruins the flow you had going.

on Feb. 12 2013 at 4:17 pm
AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
16 articles 2 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you have to forget whats gone appreciate what still remains and look forward to whats coming next

I love u sooo much baby <3  

on Feb. 12 2013 at 11:22 am
i love it