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I wasted my life

February 8, 2013
By TalentedWriter18 PLATINUM, Glen Rock, New Jersey
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I wasted my advice.
I wasted my breathe.
I wasted everything that I had left.
I wasted all of my hard earned money
Just to make you happy.
But now were seperated.
and i can speak no more of your name.
thats because you are, you were and always will be to blame.
now thats a shame.
you were so nice.
but now you are the one to pay the price.

© Carollynn G., Hawthorne, NY

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TalentedWriter18 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2013 at 10:30 am
TalentedWriter18 PLATINUM, Glen Rock, New Jersey
28 articles 0 photos 8 comments

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&quot;dont judge a book by its cover&quot;<br /> &quot;Cheating is for people who cant tell the truth&quot;

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really? 
TalentedWriter18 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2013 at 10:30 am
TalentedWriter18 PLATINUM, Glen Rock, New Jersey
28 articles 0 photos 8 comments

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&quot;dont judge a book by its cover&quot;<br /> &quot;Cheating is for people who cant tell the truth&quot;

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thanks and yeah i wasnt concentrating. i know that i should have. but thanks for the comment 
iloveyouihateyou GOLD said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 10:03 pm
iloveyouihateyou GOLD, Lowell, Indiana
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Really good,  however you used the wrong form of were (it should be we're).  That stuff kind of bothers me and I have a habit of correcting it. Sorry!
k8husted PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 1:07 pm
k8husted PLATINUM, Central Point, Oregon
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I like it :)