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Ninja

December 13, 2012
By TristianTbone BRONZE, Emerald Isle, North Carolina
TristianTbone BRONZE, Emerald Isle, North Carolina
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You can do it!


Fast as a Cheetah



Stealthy as a Puma



Deadly as a Lion



Feroucous as a Tiger



Crazy as a Panther



Awesome as a Cougar




What am I a




Ninja


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This is my first.

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on Dec. 18 2012 at 10:10 pm
1stclasspoetrylover GOLD, Highland Village, Texas
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Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.<br /> by Buddha

Wow! poetry made completely of similes! Beautiful use of the distant but near family of what we know as "big cats". Such beautiful creatures implied into such beautfiul poetry.

on Dec. 18 2012 at 10:49 am
CariePierce BRONZE, Lancaster, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Imagination rules the world.&quot; -Napoleon Bonaparte

You definitely do npt have to take my advice on this, since it's your work. It is a good concept, but I might change something. Ommit the "as a". So insead of "Fast as a cheetah/Stealthy as a puma", it would by "Fast cheeta/Stealthy puma". This would give the piece some mystery, because we wouldn't know what you're talking about until the end. Also, perhaps change "What am I a" to "What am I".