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Salty Murder

October 8, 2012
By sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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I loved life until you came along
I felt free before you
But when you came
My whole life
Came crashing down
And I died inside
I felt you rip mt heart from my chest
I felt you slit my throat
And I felt the blood drip from my wounds
You came and stood over me
While I lay helpless and vulnerable
But you poured salt in my cuts

© Alina L., Holland Patent, NY

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