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September 18, 2012
By Chero8p PLATINUM, Brooklyn Center, Minnesota
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Use me, abuse me
Show me love & hate
Show me pain, pleasure
& in between
Make things worth while
Give me everything I want
Nothing I need
Push me to succeed
Throw me over the edge
But catch me as I fall
Then do it all over again..
Show me how to live
& what it like not to die
Show me what to do
& teach me something new
Things that I love,
Things that I hate,
They can never relate
Show me the world
But not just this world
But Your world
Lets live it up
Live it out & live it out loud
Show me what it’s like
To have fun & freedom
Show me You… <3

© Lauren N., Denton, TX

The author's comments:
I wrote this about someone i loved and still do i just hope everyone will get that (and when i said abuse me i dont actually mean abuse i mean as in to over use/being around too much kind of thing if that makes sense) But this is an older poem of mine too
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