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Metaphorical Nostalgia

September 24, 2012
By RachelNarozniak GOLD, Allentown, New Jersey
RachelNarozniak GOLD, Allentown, New Jersey
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Epiphany comes all too clear when I wake upon the couch.
My cramped, crushed, disjointed limbs all twisted on that tired couch.
Perhaps a small part of me hoped to
Or even believed that I might witness morning from my bed;
to be carried up, tucked in, seven years old again.
But morning delivers its bald faced message,
Its reality check to seventeen.
For as I wake upon my couch, dressed in yesterday’s clothing,
Epiphany comes all too clear.



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on Oct. 1 2012 at 4:30 pm
Smileykin234 SILVER, Owasso, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
I&#039;m not lazy, I&#039;m an energy saver.<br /> <br /> CANT BEAT ME THEN jOIN ME1

Wonderful!

on Sep. 29 2012 at 8:41 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don&#039;t matter and those who matter don&#039;t mind&quot;- Dr. Seuss

I liked this piece a lot. It's very well structured and interesting, and many people are experiencing what you are describing. Keep it up x

on Sep. 26 2012 at 6:23 pm
wordbeater SILVER, Sharpsburg, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Truth is beauty and beauty truth, that is all ye know on earth and all ye need to know.<br /> <br /> Keats

I think you have a really good vocabulary, and the structure of this poem is interesting, you're pauses are good. Where are you going? You had an epiphany? What is it? Take me there.