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July 24, 2012
By so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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"Be the change you want to see."

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If a dog meows,
Is it considered a cat?
If a tree's leaves turn red,
Is it considered autumn?
If a light blinks rapidly,
Is considered to be on?
If a poet writes music,
Is he considered a songwriter?
If someone bangs on a door,
Is it considered knocking?
If, if, if.
If I stop this right here,
Is it considered rude?
If, if, if.
If a watermelon's orange,
Is it considered a cantaloupe?
If, if, if.
If only so many things,
So many wonders,
Can fit into a sentence-
If, if, if.
If friends have a fight,
Are they considered enemies?
Does it matter how they feel?
Or is it just how they're labeled?
If, if, if.
A name is nothing.
If, if, if.
If what's there is truly real.
And if this poem doesn't make any sense,
Then it's a work of art.

© Brian M., Fishers, IN

The author's comments:
This piece is about discrimination. It's about judging someone based on their race, religion, gender, etc. It's something, unfortunately,that most of us can relate to.
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so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2014 at 11:38 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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Thank you so much!
michaela mrianda BRONZE said...
on Feb. 22 2014 at 2:23 am
michaela mrianda BRONZE, Temporary, Other
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Wow this is amazing. Beautifully written, realistic and true. The way you addressed discrimination is inspiring this was a powerful poem and a wonderful read. Thank You for sharing it. 
so_joy SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2013 at 10:50 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

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&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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Thank you!
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on Jun. 27 2013 at 9:59 pm
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This is so unique! I really enjoyed it, it adresses an important topic so cleverly. Well done! :) Keep it up
so_joy SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2013 at 11:38 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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Thank you!
Angel1932 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 14 2013 at 2:32 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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This is amazing. I loved the twist in this. You are very talented! excellent job. Please check out some of my work and rate, would truly appreciate it.
so_joy SILVER said...
on Apr. 9 2013 at 9:34 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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Thank you!
so_joy SILVER said...
on Apr. 9 2013 at 9:33 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Thank you!
Pargaran SILVER said...
on Mar. 26 2013 at 11:28 am
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I agree with Twilightgirl! Thanks for asking me to check out your work, you are an amzing poet! I really enjoyed this one. I don't like the idea of labelling something without knowing the feeling behind it. Or, rather, the MEANING behind it. Cool stuff bro. I look forward to reading more.
amber603 GOLD said...
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You make a huge point and I love ur way of dismissing labels too:)
so_joy SILVER said...
on Feb. 13 2013 at 7:04 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Thank you soo much!!!
Twilightgirl97 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2013 at 11:56 pm
Twilightgirl97 BRONZE, Bellefonte, Pennsylvania
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You asked me to return the favor and I'm happy you did! Thank you for asking me to look at your work because its amazing. You're talented. Keep writing. I'll be watching for more from you:)
so_joy SILVER said...
on Jan. 18 2013 at 9:18 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Thank you so much!!
so_joy SILVER said...
on Jan. 18 2013 at 9:18 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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Thank you!
my_story14 SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 6:22 pm
my_story14 SILVER, Melissa, Texas
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And you thought my work was good. This was beautiful! Incredibly written and a clear statement. I have the chills!!!
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 6:15 pm
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Wonderfully written! Thanks for addressing such an important issue that we are sometimes unaware of exists. 
so_joy SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2013 at 5:25 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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Thank you!
LaurenD. BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2012 at 6:39 am
LaurenD. BRONZE, Cambridge, Other
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Well written and realistic :) Good job
so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2012 at 9:21 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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Thank you!
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2012 at 1:51 pm
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you're super at this!i love this piece! <3