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June 3, 2012
By SingAndWrite3 SILVER, Escondido, Ca, California
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A pair of eyes you cannot see,
the words of tongue not uttered free;
the working bones that transferred me,
everything seems to be watching.

Just look beside, look ahead
Look everywhere, don't be misled.
The heart of yours is surely shred,
still everything seems to be watching.

It's cornering you, taking my air.
It's here, it's there, just let it be.
The pair of eyes you cannot see;
yet they still seem to be watching.

Get the feeling that you've been seen,
Get the feeling, hear the scream...
Hear that noise- could it be dread?
Everything is watching.

© Raul R., Monte Vista, CO

The author's comments:
I hope people will hopefully go deeper than surface level with this poem & really understand what I was feeling... Nothing too complicated, it's actually pretty simple.
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