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Rain is like

April 25, 2012
By Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
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&quot;Someday, someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else.&quot;<br /> &quot;we often put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares to get through&quot;<br /> &ldquo;Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don&#039;t matter, and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&rdquo;

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Rain is like individual tears, hiding where we can't see, just waiting to be pushed to the limit.
Up above it musters into a storm that will soon explode, soaking the surface below.
Some hide in the darkness, holding the explosion inside, ignoring the soreness in their throats.
Without rain we wouldn't have rainbows or majestic weeping willow trees on every corner.
I wouldn't be able to listen to the soothing sound of the rain hitting the roof or smell of rain in the air.
And then suddenly the wind picks up, blowing the front door open and knocking the flower vase on the ground.
The wind chimes wave back and forth in the disaster.
Suddenly the rain dies.
The trees become still,
The air is silent,
Now I can't sleep.

© Kristine B., Setauket, NY

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Nicole67 PLATINUM said...
on May. 18 2012 at 11:27 am
Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Someday, someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else.&quot;<br /> &quot;we often put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares to get through&quot;<br /> &ldquo;Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don&#039;t matter, and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&rdquo;

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Thank you. I am so happy you commented! I will check out your work as well :)

 

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on May. 17 2012 at 11:02 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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I love rain, and this poem depicts it pretty awesomely  =]  good job