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Seeing this effect Everyone :(

March 13, 2012
By carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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Everyday there is someone new effected by this

Seeing everyone who lost a loved one or good friend just makes me want to cry

People don't understand how hurtful this is to many people

Lets pray for all those effected by this harmful disease

Seeing some one live from this is amazing to hear their story

Wishing I could make a change to help all these people

© John O., New City, NY

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i wrote this cause in class we learned about aids :( we got a peace of the aids quilt and brought it up to dc with us. me and 3 of my friends shared a piece of work for this.
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carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 12:23 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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it really does 
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 12:23 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks :) that means a lot 2 me
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:53 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

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This poem holds truth~
teamo14 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:04 am
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
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I like your wish, and your poem is great.
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 9:04 am
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks that means alot 2 me :)
KaylaMarie3003 GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 8:52 am
KaylaMarie3003 GOLD, King, North Carolina
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Don&#039;t cry because it&#039;s over, smile because it happened:) -dr seuss

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thats really good. one of my poems are about cancer but it hasnt been approved yet. but i would still like you to go look at my work:)