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The Feelin'

March 25, 2012
By KaylaMarie3003 GOLD, King, North Carolina
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Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened:) -dr seuss

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Eyes ready to cry,
this feelin' will never die.
The feelin' of being torn,
it all started when she was born.
Being beatin' and cussed at,
she has hated things like that.
The feelin' of hatred developed inside,
It did nothing but eat at her pride.
She wanted to get away,
there was nothing more she could say.

© Jennae P., Kennewick, WA

The author's comments:
this poem i wrote is about my past and what i've been through. My environment has changed now but yet the past is the past and the thoughts wount go away. so i thought well why not just write about it, but in a different perspective :)
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KaylaMarie3003 GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 4:35 am
KaylaMarie3003 GOLD, King, North Carolina
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thank you :) i have published more but they havent been approved

 

Parishrut BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 4:34 am
Parishrut BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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I love how every second line goes perfectly with the first! The last two lines are very effective too.

Maybe I should say no more but tell you that it deserves a 5/5!