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Pleasing Mommy

March 16, 2012
By Searchingheart PLATINUM, Farminton, Arkansas
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Love is a theory that will cause you great pain, until you find a heart that wants the same as yours, then the theory turns into a dream and a dream becomes reality.

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I try and try,
To be the best.
To excel in,
Everything I do.
I try and try,
To make you proud.
To make you see,
How much I strive to please you.

But it seems like,
I'm never good enough.
I never do things right.
You always say,
I can do better.
But I'm honestly,
trying my best.

So I'll spend my life,
Trying to be right.
Trying to be,
The daughter you want.
I'll spend forever,
Trying to please you.
Because all I want,
Is to here you say,
Honey I'm proud of you.

© Felicia F, Marlow, OK

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