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Silent War

February 21, 2012
By Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
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Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"


Limits they call them.
Reality they say.
Just more propaganda to control the stem cells of society

To turn us into mindless zombies,
Riding the way of conformity
That crashes against the shores of our laziness.
Drowning the fighters

And the dreamers

And the freethinkers

The drone of their hunger rings in our ears.
The taste of our blood drips from their mouths.

With each passing day we lose a member.
With each passing month we lose a battle.
With each passing year we get closer and closer to losing the war.



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on Mar. 10 2012 at 2:15 am
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

I feel like this is a good interpritation of how it feels to be a teenager. Stem cells is an awesome metaphor, and the rhythm near the end is super punk. Love this. 

Kinzi GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2012 at 1:41 am
Kinzi GOLD, Cairo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;There is some good in this world, and it&#039;s worth fighting for.&rdquo; -J.R.R. Tolkien<br /> <br /> &ldquo;I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more love.&rdquo; -Mother Teresa

Well I can't speak as much for places like the United States as I haven't lived there/been there enough to really see... but definitely being a person who gets to see and experience different kinds of cultures, and who lives in the Middle East helps. Where I live for example, if you look so different, or act so different because you don't want to conform, you often will not be taken seriously. It's stupid, I know, but if you walk into the bank looking a little ragged, you're likely to get less service then some guy who walks in with a suit on. That's just kind of a little example... but often in places that aren't North America, if you don't look or act in a way that people recognize, you often get stuck in spot of not being able to either communicate or accomplish. I've had this difficulty myself many times. 

 

Another thought- so many times I see people who are conforming by trying NOT to conform. That to fit in with the crowd of un-conformers they want to be a part of, they conform to their uncomformation [I think I just made up a word. XD] =]


on Mar. 6 2012 at 7:54 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;if you&#039;re not 1st you&#039;re last&quot;

Kinzi-

Can you give me an example? To me you should never conform, but i'd like to c the other side of it.


Kinzi GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2012 at 1:01 pm
Kinzi GOLD, Cairo, Other
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;There is some good in this world, and it&#039;s worth fighting for.&rdquo; -J.R.R. Tolkien<br /> <br /> &ldquo;I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more love.&rdquo; -Mother Teresa

This is really quite good! I liked the way you put it. Especially liked the image of the shore... 

 

I wonder, what would you say if someone said that there are times in life where you HAVE to conform?


on Mar. 5 2012 at 10:32 pm
AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s a saying they have, that a man has a false heart in his mouth for the world to see, another in his breast to show to his special friends and his family, and the real one, the true one, the secret one, which is never known to anyone except to himself alone, hidden only God knows where.&quot;<br /> -James Clavell, &quot;Shogun&quot;

Nice job! Very blunt, but deep at the same time. I like it a lot. 

on Feb. 25 2012 at 9:57 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I&#039;d rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I&#039;d rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye&#039;s a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example&#039;s always clear.&rdquo; -Edgar Guest

sweet! Great theme and great style! Good. Keep righting!

on Feb. 24 2012 at 7:37 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

This message is great----losing the fight and one's individuality. Awesome!

on Feb. 23 2012 at 10:38 pm
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Music is a higher revelation from wisdom and philosophy. ~Ludwig Von Beethoven

I love the message that this is trying to get across. Wonderfully written.