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Past Seduction

January 14, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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~Silence whispers,
A rushing, intimate gentle touch...
Bright eyes surrender,
Despite this persistent ache...
To give in,
Become what I don't know...
Just for your own satisfaction.~

~Playing with my mind,
Darkness intertwines with your words,
With your hands...
Making me love the feeling...
Wanting to hate the pleasure given...
But I can't resist.~

~Hunger in those eyes,
Lust slowly lingering,
Fading the tears...
Erasing the anxiety...
Who are you?
What have you made me?

~...Darling...
Will we ever know?~

© Sarah S., Poland Spring, ME

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WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 8:31 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don&#039;t get anywhere are the people who don&#039;t dream of a better place for themselves...

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Like what??? ?
-Emie- SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 8:29 pm
-Emie- SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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&quot;Well-behaved women seldom make history.&quot; - Laurel Thatcher Ulrich<br /> &quot;Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed.&quot; - G.K. Chesterton

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I like the imagery and the feel of the poem. However, I'm not a big fan of the format of the poem. It feels a little... immature and amateur. I think this poem would be better in a different format.
PoetryMaster BRONZE said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 8:05 pm
PoetryMaster BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
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-A bird does not sing because it has an answer; it sings because it has a song.<br /> - We make a living by what we get; we make a life by what we give<br /> - The summit of happiness is reached when a person is ready to be what he is.

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this is amazing :)