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January 4, 2012
By haley854 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
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haley854 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
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"Who are you to judge me. im not perfect and i dont claim to be but before you start pointing fingers make sure your own hands are clean."-unknown

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I gave you advice
I thought you would listen
I guess the title ‘best friend’
Just doesn’t change a thing.
Maybe I wasn’t convincing
Maybe I was wrong
I tried to help
Was it not enough?
Rumors seem to have more effect
Guess the title isn’t enough.

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HaleyS. GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:06 pm
HaleyS. GOLD, Byram, Mississippi
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If you drown, at least die knowing you were headed for the shore.<br /> -Ray Bradbury

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I think it's good, too. Very hot topic among teens-gossip and betrayel
haley854 GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 2:32 pm
haley854 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Who are you to judge me. im not perfect and i dont claim to be but before you start pointing fingers make sure your own hands are clean.&quot;-unknown

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Thank you!
Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:37 am
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
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&quot;Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken&quot;<br /> -Taylor Swift

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((: this is good!