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Without You

December 24, 2011
By MingMing98 BRONZE, Roy, Washington
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As the light leaves the sky
and the life leaves your eyes,
I know one thing to be true,
I can't live without you.

My heart drops
as your breathing stops,
and one things true,
I can't live without you.

The author's comments:
Well, this is my first submition. It can be taken how ever you want but to me it's about love and death. so I hope you enjoy it!
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Alice13 GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 3:20 am
Alice13 GOLD, Spanaway, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
As the eagle was killed by the arrow winged with his own feather, so the hand of the world is wounded by its own skill. -Helen Keller

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Nice job. :) I like it a lot. Beautifully written. ;) Keep writing!!! I can't wait to see more work from you. :)