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I want to hear

November 16, 2011
By samas PLATINUM, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
samas PLATINUM, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
24 articles 16 photos 6 comments

I want to hear
A heartbeat of a new born child
And of an old person
Just to hear
The different in beats
But the same sound
I wan to hear
Different languages
Filling a room
The sounds clashing
And meshing
Becoming one
As they speak
I want to hear
The shouts nada screams
Of the crowd
Cheering and booing away
Hoping to win
I want to hear
The music of the world
Coming from the mouths
Of young ones
From headphones
Plugged into the world
The cords
Wrapped around our hearts
And ears
I want to hear
The whispers in a room
Trying not to get caught
Hushed tones spilling secrets
Into the ears of the listener

I want to hear
Everything


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on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:07 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t let what you can&#039;t do stop you from doing what you can do.<br /> John Wooden<br /> The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> Eleanor Roosevelt

haha I don't know what there's a ? mark after great job oh well

on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:07 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
11 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t let what you can&#039;t do stop you from doing what you can do.<br /> John Wooden<br /> The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> Eleanor Roosevelt

Cool ending! Way to tie in all your hopes into the ending by saying everything, but I like how you thoroughly described what everything was in a creative and insightful way. Great Job?

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