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November 5, 2011
By slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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\"Live like no tomorrow\"

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I matter i count im somebody to stop leaving me out, im a person i feel im a voice i speak i have a heart that has a missing piece, are you hearing me im not studering im making it very clear that i matter and im here i have a place on this earth you make me feel like i dont already time to go i have'nt finished life or made a start but if you want me to leave alright im gone pick it drop it off leave it there so long.

© Kaitlin M., Vincent, OH

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i wrote this because,sometimes teens feel like they don't belong, like there not here.so this is a poem to show your here you matter,stand up and show everyone who you are,not who you try to be.
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EmoAngel18 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:40 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan&quot;<br /> -by. Blood On The Dance Floor

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i love ur poem......sometimes i feel like i dont belong in this world cuz of what people say.

dont forget to read my poem "Chersihed"

I should be posting a few more poems soon.....so be sure to check my page :)

slaborin98 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:25 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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ahahahah thanks

 

RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:20 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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its me LivingMyLife idk y my name didnt show up...grrr
slaborin98 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:05 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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\&quot;Live like no tomorrow\&quot;

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who r ruand thanks

 

 

. said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:01 pm
really good
slaborin98 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:39 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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thank you :)

 

sweetheart2598 SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:39 pm
sweetheart2598 SILVER, Atlatna, Georgia
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nice job this is really good

 

slaborin98 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:39 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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THATS MEANS THE WORLD THANKZZZ

 

AnimaCordis GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:36 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
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I like how the last part is stream of coincessnes, this voice sounds very trapped, it's an interesting poem!
slaborin98 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:30 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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okay thxx

 

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:29 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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you are very welcome!
TapTap SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:28 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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I love the idea and meaning of the poem, i would i agree with former comments though, i would use commas! Otherwise fanytastic!

 

slaborin98 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:26 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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thankkks

 

RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:23 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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i love this poem and what it says. its a good message to get out. i would recommend pressing enter once in a while instead of writing it like a run on sentence.

suggestion:

i matter

i count

im somebody too

stop leaving me out

I'm a person

I feel

I'm a voice

I speak

I have a heart

that has a missing piece

are you hearing me?

im not studdering

im making it very clear

that i matter

and im here

i have a place on this earth

you make me feel like i dont

already time to go?

i havent finished life

or made a start

but if you want me to leave

alright im gone

pick it

drop it off

leave it there

so long...

 

 

its a beautiful poem. thats just a suggestion to making ti easier to read. youve got talent selena!

leafy said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:11 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: I hate it.&nbsp;<br /> Gil: You haven&#039;t even read it yet.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: If it&#039;s bad, I&#039;ll hate it. If it&#039;s good, then I&#039;ll be envious and hate it even more. You don&#039;t want the opinion of another writer.&nbsp;

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Im not trying to offend you, you just asked my to read and review it, and I gave my honest opinion. And there are some parts that I do like to it slaborin.
leafy said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:11 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: I hate it.&nbsp;<br /> Gil: You haven&#039;t even read it yet.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: If it&#039;s bad, I&#039;ll hate it. If it&#039;s good, then I&#039;ll be envious and hate it even more. You don&#039;t want the opinion of another writer.&nbsp;

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One last thing, I would at least suggest commas, so it's easier to read, if you want to keep the format.
leafy said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:08 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: I hate it.&nbsp;<br /> Gil: You haven&#039;t even read it yet.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: If it&#039;s bad, I&#039;ll hate it. If it&#039;s good, then I&#039;ll be envious and hate it even more. You don&#039;t want the opinion of another writer.&nbsp;

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I loved the message you sent in this, and wonderment is right, it is very relatable, especially for teens, so kudos for you on that. However, I'm not a big fan of the paragraph format -- it's a poem, so there should be lines (that's my opinion btw). Also, "studdering" should be "stuttering," "im" should be "i'm", and "have'nt" should be "haven't." other than that, nice job!
slaborin98 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:59 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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:((((OK THXX
Wonderment DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:57 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I like this.  Its very realtable cause lots of people feel that way. I like how relatable it is.  The only thing I don't like is the paragraph format, its hard and a bit werid when poetry is in a paragraph form. Other than that its a total Plus and thumbs up.
slaborin98 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:49 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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THANK YOU AND I WILLL WATCH 4DA GRAMMERERER LOL HAHAAH