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Too Many Pieces...I Am Dead

October 23, 2011
By RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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Too many pieces,
my heart.
Like shattered glass,
every piece cutting through me,
like a knife.
Now covered in blood,
the pain I hold is visible.
All the sorrow I hold inside,
is oozing out my broken heart,
for all public to see.
To hear my screams,
and feel my lifeless heart,
taste the blood inside your mouth,
that was once keeping me alive.
My heart,
now shattered.
I am dead

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RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 3:13 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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"hauntingly beautiful" awwww :) thx kendis
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:51 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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awwwww thankyou!!!!!! :)
GretaGibson PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:45 pm
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the pain i hold is now visible.... i love that line its so hauntingly beautiful! Great job brooke
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:31 pm
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thank you :) alot :)
Loftus GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:23 pm
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I love this. Quite an amazing piece of work.