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Child Soldiers MAG

March 13, 2008
By Courtney Cyr BRONZE, Eaton, Colorado
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Their eyes tell silent stories.
Stories that would shock even the darkest of hearts.
These eyes have seen worse than some could even dream of.
They’ve seen killing and death, and pain and suffering to extents that can be hard to imagine.
Eyes that should be learning how to read are instead being taught how to fight.
Emotionless eyes are being forced to kill in gruesome ways.
Eyes that seem to have run out of tears, because crying never helped.
Their sobs are unheard, their tears are unseen.
Children who are innocent are being ruined by men who see no hope in their government.
Men who are willing to take advantage of an irreplaceable innocence.
The eyes are deep brown.
A brown so deep you could get lost in it.
Eyes that catch attention for their beauty.
They silently tell of innocence lost and of silent tears cried.
These are the eyes of a child soldier.

© Chelsea M., Garmisch-Partenkirchen, Germany

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josie1314 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 5:27 pm
josie1314 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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I know what you mean!! There is a facebook petition that demands the arrest of the rebel army leader who is taking all these children. His name is Joseph Kony and whoever reads this, go to Facebook, search Invisible Children, and go sign their petition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
beccawrites94 said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 5:20 pm
This poem reminds me of an organization that is trying to prevent the abuse of child soldiers, Invisible Children. You really described everything well and I am glad that is was published. We need to get the word out about what is happening to kids our age and some much younger.
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on Dec. 11 2009 at 1:18 pm
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This is an amazing poem. I love the truth behind it and how heartfelt the theme is. I really enjoy poems that have real life themes and current issues of the world. Your style is great, too.
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on Dec. 11 2009 at 10:49 am
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This reminds me of Emimen's song "Toy Soldier" even though it has nothing to do with it. I really enjoyed reading this. It was a great poem. It's sad to know that everything that is written above is actually true.
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on Dec. 11 2009 at 8:09 am
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Yea kids are the future, why are we fighting wars at our age? We should stop this.
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on Dec. 11 2009 at 8:07 am
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great poem its really sad that childern have to go through things like that its a shame for anyone to have to experince anything like this but life sucks ):
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on Dec. 11 2009 at 6:42 am
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I would love to know the story behind this. I live in a country with many such children, an you have described them perfectly. Well done!
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on Dec. 4 2009 at 2:37 pm
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Wonderful work. It's very sad, but yet unfortunatly true.
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on Nov. 19 2009 at 3:30 pm
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Great job. I LOVE IT... Keep up the great work. oh, and by the way congrats on having it published in the magazine.
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So sad, and it's very true. We discussed it last year in social sciences, and it was difficult for me to wrap my head around the fact that boys my age were tossing bombs and not baseballs, girls were tying helmets on their head and not bows in their hair...
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on Nov. 19 2009 at 9:50 am
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I loved this. It is beautifully powerful work, and managed to capture the essence of sadness extremely well.

Fantastic job!
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on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:39 am
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wonderful poem! you are a talented writer!!! keep up the jaw-dropping work :) oh yeah if you have time could you maybe read, comment, and rate my poem called "Sensitive Am I?" Thanx. :)
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great poem.I see a lot of truth behind it.
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Amazing, keep writing!!
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I LOVE IT... dont ever stop writing.... you're to good to stop
bamboom212 said...
on Nov. 1 2009 at 9:17 pm
Wow, unbelievable. This poem really got to me. I personally have no talent in poetry, but this is amazing. Keep up the awesome work!! I wanna read more!! :P
sobel95 SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 11:19 pm
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"Eyes that seem to have run out of tears, because crying never helped." That part really spoke to me. Keep up the great work!
geezlike said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 10:45 pm
Yes, it's a fantastic poem, but I don't think it was written to get personal compliments...child soldiers are true and their lives are destroyed along with those of their families. It is usually the youth of the world that stands up and demands that things change. How can we stand together to stop this kind of abuse of innocence and youth in our world?
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on Oct. 28 2009 at 9:42 pm
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this is an amazing poem, it brought tears to my eyes.
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outstanding poem, real truth seen through an artists eyes, just one way to express a disturbing matter, and a very good way at that.