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Gone in the sky

September 30, 2011
By Narene_baby SILVER, Scappoose, Oregon
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I can’t be saved
I won’t be found
Laying here
On the ground
The roof caved in
I’m all alone
My nightmares
Gone
Am I saved
I will be found
Flying high
In the sky
I might have died
But I’m not alone
My nightmares
Gone
I have been saved!

© Jacob W., Oklahoma City, OK

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This is just something I wrote when I was upset.
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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 6:04 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don&#039;t you go to sleep, it&#039;s such a bitter form of refuge, oh don&#039;t you know the kingdom&#039;s under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

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I like it, I don't normally enjoy religious stuff, but this was much better than normal :)

Check out my stuff sometime?

Eshshah PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 7:10 am
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep.&quot; -Robert Frost

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nice poem really deep, I feel the fear and sorrow. I think it's lying instead of laying though.