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you and I

September 6, 2011
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
love comes and goes,<br /> just like the watter flows


At first you were all I needed
you and I were all I could think of
people said that I wouldn’t keep it
all I needed was a leap of faith
but I was invisible to you
I was just in the friend to you
while you were on your own
I was all alone like a shadow on a cloudy day
as I waited on you and the sunshine
then I let you know that I was in love with you
so you could see my true beauty
then we were together like a dream come true
but then my dream shattered
when we disagreed often
we fought about almost every thing
we fought until I cried
and yelled until we were horse
we broke up more than a dozen times
our relationship made me frustrated
and then there was the argument
that broke us up for good
and now that is all I think of
at first I thought it was a tragedy
I will miss the good times greatly
but I won’t miss the fights
that still kept me up at night
our first kiss sent sparks flying
now you wont even look at me
we wrote notes to each other every day
and now you wont even talk to me
I will never be in a relationship with you
ever again


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It comes naturaly

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cookiegirl said...
on Sep. 20 2011 at 11:27 am
It's well written, nice poem:). Good job!

on Sep. 19 2011 at 1:25 pm
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
32 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
love comes and goes,<br /> just like the watter flows

please tell me how I did on this poem