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August 25, 2011
By WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDied GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDied GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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My life is everything but so were you, My life is unscratchable but then you riped me apart.

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Hey one question what is your deal.
My deal?
You mean my problem?
My problem is the war,
The war on what?
The war at school,
The poverty,
And the battle against the color of people skin,
Their language,
And my deal,
is you,
You don't care about things so why should i do anything toward that.

© Meaghan M., South Portland, ME

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WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDied GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2011 at 7:18 pm
WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDied GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
12 articles 1 photo 17 comments

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My life is everything but so were you, My life is unscratchable but then you riped me apart.

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Really. You like it. That is amazing. Oh and my username is one that you woul have to think long and hard on. It means that no one will care if everyone died as in if every one died no one could care because they are already dead so they wouldn't have a choice to care. You know what I mean now?
far.from.you. GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2011 at 1:55 pm
far.from.you. GOLD, Bradenton, Florida
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" She completly fell for him, but he didnt even stumble...</3" -unknown.

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this is really good(:.... i have no negative comments except when i was reading what your username was i was confused. so it makes more sense .aybe you should changeit too "whowillcareifeveryonesdead" or "whowouldcareifeveronedies"just a suggestion. but very good poem.