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July 28, 2011
By Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
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Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
9 articles 7 photos 62 comments

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Life is what your thoughts make it.<br /> Happiness, success and the greatest of achievements are nothing if you don&#039;t have someone to share it with. <br /> A life lived for others is a life worthwhile - Albert Einstein.

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The moments
We were in love,
Were the moments
I lived.

The moments
We fought,
Were the moments
I grew stronger.

The moment
We broke up,
Was the moment
I broke free.

© Louisa G., Chicopee, MA

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A little something about a relationship from my past.
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AriShine GOLD said...
on Oct. 7 2012 at 12:51 pm
AriShine GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
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Dramatic wording, relatable message. Nice work!
Mystiecub said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 11:35 am
Wow. I can relate to this poem. Great work, keep writing :D
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:28 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

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&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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ur welcome :p
Ha-5-rika SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 10:36 am
Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life is what your thoughts make it.<br /> Happiness, success and the greatest of achievements are nothing if you don&#039;t have someone to share it with. <br /> A life lived for others is a life worthwhile - Albert Einstein.

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Thank you very much for commenting. 
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 11:17 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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i love that it was short and to the pint i write short pieces to and it's nice to see that other people write short pieces also this w as beautiful i loved the last 2 stanzas
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 4 2011 at 2:09 am
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Nice!!! It kind of surprised me when it ended so soon, but I actually love what you're saying in here. It flows very well too :)
Lola_Black GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 10:25 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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Five stars, my friend. Simply wonderful