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all you said

July 14, 2011
By BreLyn_Boss BRONZE, Fpo, Other
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BreLyn_Boss BRONZE, Fpo, Other
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when i first met you,
you didn't say hi or your beautiful.
all you said was i love you.

then i started dating you.
you didn't talk to me much
and when you did
all you said was i love you.

after dating we become engaged.
i start to worry about kids,housing,and money
but you didn't care at all.
all you said was i love you.

a week before getting married
picking out perfect flowers and details to make our wedding come true.
nodding and smiling is all you did.
and all you said was i love you.

our wedding day.
walking down the church aisle waiting to say i do
but during our vows you wouldn't say i do.
all you said was i love you.

then i realized you weren't for me.
as i ran out of the church as fast as i could.
eyes full of tears.
and all you shouted was i love you

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