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I am Anne Frank

June 12, 2011
By Hippiealien SILVER, Fair Oaks, California
Hippiealien SILVER, Fair Oaks, California
7 articles 5 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
A Idea and a number 2 pencil can take you anywhere.


I am Anne Frank, A Jewish, and smart young girl.
I hear Sorrow, children crying People dying, screams of terror.
I see Hunger.hate, love and hope.
I say things I shouldn’t, Good things as well as bad.
I cry at the hate, cry at the sorrow, cry when Mum makes me feel down.
I pretend I’m happy with a smiling Mask, I pretend there words don’t hurt, I pretend I’m perfect.

I am Anne frank, a teenager, Eager to learn young girl.
I want freedom, to feel the cool summer breeze on my neck.
I need Love, a mum, and a girlfriend to hang out with.
I hope I can leave the annex soon that the war will end soon.
I fear I will die, I wont see the end of the war, and that we cling onto hope for nothing.

I am Anne Frank, An intelligent, Talented, young girl.
I feel lonely, guilty that I shall live while others suffer, but happy while I’m with peter.
I try to be good, say kind things, and be respectful.
I wonder if peter loves me, if this war will ever end, if lies is okay.
I dream the day we leave, that peter will love me.
I believe, that all people are good, this war will end.
I am Anne frank a Jewish young smart girl.


The author's comments:
I wrote this for school,but this is one of my favorite poems i have written.

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Idek said...
on Mar. 24 2015 at 8:39 pm
Omg that's really good!

on Jul. 12 2011 at 9:58 am
ArgonElement SILVER, The Woodlands, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Question Authority.

I really love this. Just use less adjectives, so that it will flow better.

on Jul. 7 2011 at 4:46 pm
Trilobite BRONZE, Lower Burrell, Pennsylvania
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Genius is 1% imagination and 99% perspiration.&quot;~Thomas Edison<br /> &quot;Anyone who has a child today should train him to be either a physicist or a ballet dancer. Then he&#039;ll escape.&quot;~W. H. Auden

This is really a great, moving piece.  Just make sure to capitalize proper nouns, places, and items, and also watch out for typos (using "." instead of "," when it isn't for artistic purposes).  Keep writing! :)

on Jul. 5 2011 at 1:29 am
Hippiealien SILVER, Fair Oaks, California
7 articles 5 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
A Idea and a number 2 pencil can take you anywhere.

thanks! and haha i didn't catch that! thanks,I'll have to change that =P

on Jul. 4 2011 at 11:42 pm
RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
22 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t cry because it&#039;s over, smile because it happened.&quot;

I like this. I feel like you really captured who Anne Frank was. Make sure you watch your capitilization though. Peter should be capitalized.