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Laying in a Medow

May 6, 2011
By KaylaChristine BRONZE, Trophy Club, Texas
KaylaChristine BRONZE, Trophy Club, Texas
3 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never give up on a person you cant go a day without thinking about... <3 :)


Lying in a meadow,
Hiding in the grass.
Staring at the stars,
But a thought distracts me.
All I think about is you, and
The way you make me feel.

I love the way you smile,
I love the way you laugh,
I love the way your eyes glitter,
When you are standing in the light.

I love the way you we talk for hours,
I love the way you listen.
I love the way we stay on the phone for hours,
But say nothing at all.

I love the way you stand up for me,
I love the way you tease me.
I love the way you say hello,
Every morning I walk in.
Most of all I love the way you stay by me,
No matter where I am.

So next time when I am lying in a meadow,
And I'm hiding in the grass.
When I'm staring at the stars,
You will be besides me


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on Jun. 22 2011 at 9:10 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

Awwwwww :) How sweet.... I love it!!!

on Jun. 22 2011 at 1:23 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo.&quot;~ Lauren Lopez in Starship<br /> &quot;If you don&#039;t die for something, I&#039;ll kill you for nothing.&quot;~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

I really no constructive criticism for this piece.  It coveys your emotion very well and it drew me in.  I like when someones work is able to do that. The only thing that I saw was that the last line should be beside instead of besides.