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Behind My Brown Eyes

April 18, 2011
By StrawBerries. BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
StrawBerries. BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life's What You Make It !


Behind my brown eyes, what do you see ? A person who has been through a lot at such a young age. A very talented female . A young black African American who struggles to express her self. Why do she struggle ? Trying not to let her enemies get the best of her. Why does she always stand alone ? Maybe because she has no one beside her to defend her and to bring her up when she feels down . Family ? Friends ? Not even ! She came in this world alone I guest that's how she has to leave it . Why Don't she worry when she's alone. Because friends are not REAL , its just a word that you call people you talk to kind of on a day to day basis. Behind My Brown Eyes : father i want you to tell me this ,Ha Ha I got a laugh out of that but really what do you see ? A daughter ? a friend ? Someone you hurt not physically but emotionally. Behind My Brown Eyes !



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on May. 17 2011 at 1:15 pm
RawrIts.Karax33 BRONZE, Moundsville, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a wonderland, sometimes you get lost and you cant find your way back" -myself :]

I agreee! I love this [:

on May. 16 2011 at 9:21 am
sk8er691969 GOLD, Elizabeth, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
It's better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for what your not.

Wow i feel that, i know how u feel

Very nice poem


on May. 16 2011 at 7:48 am
FearlessnTearless00 SILVER, Grand Junction, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
a penny saved is a penny earned

Wow! this is rly gud it expesses how u feel and i like how u r tryin to get a point across wothout acually saying it :)

on May. 14 2011 at 4:39 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one&#039;s mistakes.&quot; Oscar Wilde <br /> <br /> &quot;The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame.&quot;

I like how you are trying to get a point across and a story (?) kind of without straight up saying it. This could be better if maybe you split it up more and helped it flow smoother. Just suggestions :) oh and grammar and spelling(i am terrible at them but it really does improve a piece of work) i really liked it though