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Violent Rain

March 10, 2011
By Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
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Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells." From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

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Playing like its all the same,
dancing in a Violent Rain,
Spining, spining, round & round
god don't let me hit the ground,
Crazy crazy like the wind,
I swear never to go back again,
Crying fighting through the night,
how i wish for a hint of light,
Cruel words fall on parted lips,
as a cool tear slides down red hot skin...

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

The author's comments:
random on a super stormy day. Raining, lighting, thunder, tornado warnings; the whole shebang!! I love thunderstorms!!
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