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Why Do I Love You.

March 3, 2011
By MayaJun3 SILVER, Lunenburg, Massachusetts
MayaJun3 SILVER, Lunenburg, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You're never fully dressed without a smile.


I hate the way you look at me.
I hate the way you glance.
I hate the way you turn around
And ask me if I want to dance.
It hurts to see you talking with her.
It hurts when she makes you smile.
I hate the way I'm in the back of everything.
Back of your mind,
Your thoughts,
Your cares.
It hurts
When you rollerblade by my house
and hold my hand at night.
I hate that you're with her
and that I have to act like I could
Care. Less.
Life has disappointments.
Well yeah,
But it's different when your life IS one.
I hate your sweet smile
and the way you do your hair.
But what I hate most of all
Is how I actually care.



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on Jun. 21 2011 at 9:55 pm
MayaJun3 SILVER, Lunenburg, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You're never fully dressed without a smile.

You're too kind! I love that somone is getting something out of what I'm writing! 

on Jun. 21 2011 at 9:53 pm
shapeshifter56 GOLD, Cave Creek, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Instead of waiting for the storm to pass, learn to dance in the rain.&quot;<br /> --Unknown Author

Oops. When I said wonder I really meant wonderful.

on Jun. 21 2011 at 9:52 pm
shapeshifter56 GOLD, Cave Creek, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Instead of waiting for the storm to pass, learn to dance in the rain.&quot;<br /> --Unknown Author

I have read a lot of your poems, and you are truly a brilliant writer. This poem is wonder, sad, and so true!

on Jun. 18 2011 at 3:38 pm
InPurpleInk BRONZE, SomewhereOverTheRainbow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You are a lover of words; someday you will write a book.&quot; ~Chinese fortune

I like the rhyming.  Kind of sad, but with a fast-paced flow and rhythm.  Nice job.

on Mar. 30 2011 at 9:12 pm
MayaJun3 SILVER, Lunenburg, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
You&#039;re never fully dressed without a smile.

Thanks so much. That means a lot to me.

on Mar. 30 2011 at 9:06 pm
buggzbunnie BRONZE, Middle River, Maryland
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this piece touches me i could actually relate this your piece is the best so far