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Dreams

February 15, 2011
By TaylorNB BRONZE, Hillsboro, Missouri
TaylorNB BRONZE, Hillsboro, Missouri
2 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Two roads diverged in a wood and I-<br /> I took the one less travled by, and that has made all the difference&quot;<br /> -Robert Frost


I am laying in the dark
My dreams are hovering like a shark
Waiting until I drift into the dark
Sleep washes over my eyes
It's the one thing I despise
There is so much to know
How will I discover if I am in the dark
I finally let my dreams attack
Now I know the knowledge I used to lack


The author's comments:
I am a beginner, but I spontaneously wrote this. I thought it was cute!

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on Mar. 24 2011 at 10:08 am
Monkee63 SILVER, Independence, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I want to feel my life while I&#039;m in it&quot;- Meryl Streep<br /> &quot;Live, Life Love&quot;<br /> &quot;Everybody wants happiness, nobody wants pain, but you can&#039;t have a rainbow without a little rain.&quot;

I really like this. Its good for a beginner. You have a great piece here. The rhyming is great...and I really love the flow of the words and how it all just flows together!

on Mar. 22 2011 at 8:32 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
134 articles 2 photos 85 comments
Good for a beginner, you have potential so keep writing. :)