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Who is to blame?

February 11, 2011
By Finding-me PLATINUM, Dover-Foxcroft, Maine
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Sun goes down without a sound,
leaving me in darkest shroud,
a broken mirror reflects no truth,
in distortion lies no power to sooth,
listen to the singer sing,
of haunting passion mellodies,
living in the pits of hell,
listen to the passion swell,
dying down to one last flame,
tell me now,
who is to blame?

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