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Gave in and Give up

February 11, 2011
By ThAtGuRl PLATINUM, Perris, California
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ThAtGuRl PLATINUM, Perris, California
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i believe things happen for a reason.people change so you learn to let go,things go wrong so you can appreciate them when thier right.you believe lies so you learn to trust no one but urself and sumtimes good things fall apart so bttr things can 2gthr

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give in and gave up
lost my breath and couldnt keep up
slipped away and fell deep
couldnt pull myself to my feet

© Jessica T., Cincinatti, OH

The author's comments:
the way things happen after you give in to everything wrong in life your stuck and cant get out of it
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