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February 12, 2011
By Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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Impossible is just an excuse for people who have given up.- My older brother

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Clouds form in my mind
Don't know where I am
Trying to push through the fog to find me

What happened to me?
What did you do?
It was all your lies

The lies that destroy
The lies that draw back
The lies that damage

What you did to me I will undo
I no longer believe you foolishness
There's a part of me, and another
Putting my self back together

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JustAnotherOwl SILVER said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 9:14 am
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
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&quot;See, we don&#039;t really care who you are;<br /> Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.<br /> So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer&#039;s disease,<br /> And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Sanctuary&quot;- Paradise Fears

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Once again, great job! I like the last stanza best. (: It makes you hope everything will be okay! It's a sad experience, but it makes a great poem!! (Oh, and I'm sorry that I didn't comment on ALL your poems- you have A LOT and I just don't have the time today!)
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 12 2011 at 12:20 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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&quot;If You Don&#039;t Fight Back, You&#039;ve Already Lost.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs.&quot;

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same thing happened to me... bad experience= great poem!
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 7:19 am
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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I got over it made new friends so its all good now
shop4life said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 5:30 pm
shop4life, Concord, New Hampshire
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aw, I'm sorry to hear that. . I know how that feels!
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 5:14 pm
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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Impossible is just an excuse for people who have given up.- My older brother

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Backstabbed my a once good friend.
shop4life said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 4:42 pm
shop4life, Concord, New Hampshire
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I like it. What made you write it? :)