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A Soul

December 18, 2010
By SonRisA SILVER, Atoka, Oklahoma
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SonRisA SILVER, Atoka, Oklahoma
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GIVE ME LIFE ANDLIBERTY<br /> or give me like a cupcake or doddleberries <br /> Ya know anything to make fat people happy ;D

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Birds in the sky you know how I feel
The pull of the wind
The sheer pleasure of freedom

Now tears of red fall from skin
as the needle and thread
sow back my wings

bound to the ground
so and so
with in my heart i found


A Soul

© Katie S., Pearland, TX

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.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 2:31 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡&deg;)

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Wow, quite painful I like the beginning, middle and end !
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 7:10 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

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&quot;I&#039;m living in a shell with no soul&quot; -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)<br /> &quot;Time still turns the pages of the book it&#039;s burned&quot; -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

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You're welcome :) Sorry I was so wishy-washy, but I really love the poem now.  It's AMAZING!!!!
SonRisA SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2011 at 7:31 pm
SonRisA SILVER, Atoka, Oklahoma
8 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
GIVE ME LIFE ANDLIBERTY<br /> or give me like a cupcake or doddleberries <br /> Ya know anything to make fat people happy ;D

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:) thanks i appricaite the excitment and critc
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 2:24 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m living in a shell with no soul&quot; -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)<br /> &quot;Time still turns the pages of the book it&#039;s burned&quot; -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

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Um...I'm really not sure.  I read over it again and I think it sounds fine.  I really like how you described how you'd sow your wings back on.  I don't know what I was thinking before, I think it sounds amazing.  I truely do....I can feel it now!  It's screaming to me!!!  It's AMAZING!!!
SonRisA SILVER said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 10:56 am
SonRisA SILVER, Atoka, Oklahoma
8 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
GIVE ME LIFE ANDLIBERTY<br /> or give me like a cupcake or doddleberries <br /> Ya know anything to make fat people happy ;D

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i agree but i thought adding any thing else would destory the thought of it. Do u have any ideas what to add to it?
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2011 at 6:29 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m living in a shell with no soul&quot; -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)<br /> &quot;Time still turns the pages of the book it&#039;s burned&quot; -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

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This is really good but it could be a little bit longer.