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Lucid Dreams

October 27, 2010
By AaronLawrence SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
AaronLawrence SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
9 articles 5 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
I may be an idiot, but i&#039;m not stupid<br /> <br /> Until you change me enough that i&#039;m convinced I need to change, I won&#039;t change


Dreams are scattered fragments of
The past, present and future.
Liked a thousand shards of glass,
Randomly reflecting bits
Of each other.

So what is lucidity?
A torn lifeline cast in to pull You up and out of
The storm of shattered mirrors,
Where you smother.


The author's comments:
Poetry isn't really my strong point, I love poetry but I struggled to write it, it doesn't come naturaly like the other writing i do, this piece took me forever.

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on Nov. 15 2010 at 11:23 am
AaronLawrence SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
9 articles 5 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
I may be an idiot, but i&#039;m not stupid<br /> <br /> Until you change me enough that i&#039;m convinced I need to change, I won&#039;t change

Shoot!  I just realized i had a typo, since it was so short i just rewrote it on the sight instead of coping it and i wrote liked instead of like, that messed up the whole flow of the poem, is there anyway to remove this?